we have been writing recounts with the success criteria of 3 paragraphs, 2 similes, and 2 metaphor's.
hope you enjoy mine.
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The Sleepover
BOOM! SNAP! CRACKLE! We were popping party poppers and what a noise they made! They were as loud as a herd of elephants! Today is gonna be the most epic party ever! Mum had made some extra special food for my sleepover party I was having, and I was allowed to help decorate the house. This is gonna be so awesome.
1 hour later…
Have you ever eaten something so hott8, it comes out of your nose? Man it hurts. It was lunch time, and I was sitting on the deck eating sushi with too much wasabi on it. My step brother and sister were with me. Mum heard a car pull up in my driveway. “Ani I think one of you friends are here” yelled mum from the kitchen. I raced downstairs, and opened the door. “Hey Depla” said Araminta.
“Hi” I said. I let Araminta come inside, then I went back to my sushi. “I think you should play with your friend” said mum. “UGHHH” I shouted “CAN’T I JUST EAT MY SUSHI!”. “No” said mum sternly. “UGHHHH!!” I shrieked again but this time in Mum’s face. “Depla, come outside and play with me” said Araminta.
“Should we go downstairs and wait for everyone else?” I asked. “Ok” said Araminta.
“YIPPEE!”. Shouted Araminta while running down the stairs. You should have seen how fast she was! I trudged down the stairs. “Hurry up you lazy pig!” yelled Araminta.. We went over to the gate then waited, while playing paper scissors rock. Soon lots of friends started to arrive, then we played some games, choked on food, fell asleep and made jokes.
Mmm. melted chocolate. Tasty icing. Soft base. it was time for the cake.
It was absolutely humongous. I got to cut the cake. It was fun.
“When can we do the treasure hunt?” asked Juanita.
“Later” said dad while stuffing chips into his mouth. “UGHHH! you greedy maggot!” I screamed in his face. “Fine” dad said. “Let’s do it now.”
Dad and caleb ran off, and mum came and explained the rules to us. We went out, found clues and code crackers, fought a monster (which was actually dad dressed up) and got all the treasure. YIPPEE! Chocolate! My favourite!
After that we watched a movie and went to then it was all silence. As I fell asleep, there were scary ghosts haunting my dreams, while all the excitement slowly fell into a deep darkness. In the morning, we had rice bubbles for breakfast that sort of looked like slugs. After that, all my friends went home and the house was peaceful at last.
I enjoyed the party but sleeping in the lounge gave me the tingly feeling, like a tarantula was crawling up my spine.
The end.
